[征文作品] 【岁末征文活动】【艾婉儿的漫长生命】

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1楼大中小发表于 2009-1-22 19:51 显示全部帖子

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本来故事很有传奇色彩，是个好题材。作者在总体上能将故事表述清楚。但作者的改编，似乎表达的功力有所不及，对性事的表述火候欠缺，总觉得笔墨过于肤浅，并不能煽动读者的情欲和幻想！

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