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[离任作者] 【性奴美母】（1－8）

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很不错的乱派虐文,虐文里的情况发生的可能性就比较小,所以作者天马行空的想象了,不过对"妈妈"的戏份略显偏少,而且人物形象不够丰满,与标题貌似有些偏离,建议作者续文能否对"妈妈"着墨点多些,不仅要突出"妈"对性虐的喜好,还能体现"妈妈"对"我"的母爱,这样在享受性虐的快感时,才能水乳交融.另外,作者好象留了不少伏笔,如果真能一一展开,说不定本文真能成为乱派虐文的经典亦未可知,很是期待那一天的到来!
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